Poem excerpt _2020 Birdwatch_ by chamrickwriter randomstoryteller with image of daffodils 940x788px

Everything came sooner this year—

‘February Gold’ daffodils frilling

the neighbor’s yard, marching in patches,

like bonneted Dutch dolls patterning the quilts

hand-stitched by my grandmother in the halo

of a Depression glass kerosene lamp;

the ground thaw of the full worm supermoon,

with the mounding of earthworm droppings

crushed under my boot weeks before

the tropical rush of stopover warblers;

March passing, blurred with rain and dark clumps

of turkey vultures roosting in a stand

of loblolly pines—I sheltered in place,

exceeding social distancing by a backyard length,

in full retreat to an afternoon of porch sitting—

weary of text bursts and COVID-19 tweetstorms.

 

Hissing, I heard hissing, and my neighbor, fenced in,

called that the birds would not snatch the pacing cat.

I took up my father’s cracked binoculars,

trying to zero in, for the first time, on why

he hovered over field guides to American birds;

his lifelong dream was to find a birdfeeder

that defied squirrels—he never did.

The vultures’ red, shrunken heads wrinkled,

scrubbed bald, like the scalps of ancient monks;

the night before, their hooked beaks, like polished bone,

had ripped into a possum rotting by the garbage.

Free of flesh, they flapped, shaking off the damp,

and rose, thermal riding, with the two-tone underside

of their wings spread in shallow V’s—carrion-feaster comfort

wing-warping on a cleansing breeze.

My thanks to all the readers and Facebook friends who have stuck with me during my return to poetry. Your support motivated me to enter the 2020 writing competition sponsored by the Atlanta Writers Club (a great community of creatives). “2020 Birdwatch” placed as a runner-up for the Natasha Trethewey Prize for Poetry, with subsequent publication in The Blue Mountain Review. Art in any form is therapy, especially during this time, and it propels us to embrace the beauty of this world.

 

9 responses to “2020 Birdwatch (nature heals in an unlikely year)”

  1. fonde Avatar
    fonde

    Wow,,,,,,,what a great poem!

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Hey Fonde. Thanks for reading. Wishing you and your family a great holiday! Best, ch

    2. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks so much for reading, Fonde. Happy holidays!

  2. Karen Lin Avatar
    Karen Lin

    Congratulations on the recognition of 2020 Birdwatch! I suspect we’ll see much more praise as your poems get out there more!

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Hi Karen. Just catching up to your kind comment. I am submitting more poems–thanks for encouraging me to take that step!

    2. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks, Karen. I am submitting more poems in the next few months. I appreciate your encouragement.

  3. Leila Lou Baldwin Avatar
    Leila Lou Baldwin

    Your poetry is always so vivid, so evocative. Just pure pleasure to escape this world into your magical land beyond time

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks so much for reading this, Leila Lou, and taking the time to comment. Wishing you a warm and wonderful holiday–and my best to everyone in your family! (I am so behind on correspondence.)

    2. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks, Leila Lou. I am just now catching up on comments. All the best to you and yours for the holidays! xo

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