Immersion poem excerpt by Catherine Hamrick randomstoryteller.com with image of coquina shells

I never toe-squished from a rocky shore

To wade into a duck-and-water cover

That would salvage my muddy, sidestepping soul.

The Mississippi sun’s baptismal fire

Plunged me into turquoise-tiled bliss

While polka dots snowed my slick lime Speedo—

A state of grace fogging my goggles.

This meditation ran long and lean,

Paced by thirty-two concrete-grazed flip turns

And steadily churned whip kicks—

Thoughts slow-motioned in cloudy sounds,

And the pool estuaried

Into my paintbox season

Of the Gulf of Mexico

Ruching Veronese green

Under cerulean skies

Stroked sea-salt clean;

Waves pulled back an instant

Then rushed, their edges like linen cambric,

Muffle-roaring and washing over

A village of small dome houses

Built after my mother showed me

How to dig in my foot

And hold it there—not to pull out—

Until my hands pat-patted

A sand house that God did not understand;

It was was, after all, far more delightful

Than something built on a rock.

I followed the earthbound flight

Of coquina butterflies

Scooped and tossed with the swipe 

Of each wave,

Their tinier-than-penny shells

Rippling rainbows, sunsets, and indigo depths—

A bucketful of wonders

Finer than my fingerprints;

In a thousand footfalls

Patterning the dry white beach,

I heard the squeaks of emerald summers

On Santa Rosa Island—

Until a sudden breath pop-up

Filled with the chorine squeals

Of children water-winging in the shallows—

And I rubbed my goggles clear.

8 responses to “Immersion”

  1. Karen Lin Avatar
    Karen Lin

    Nice. Brought back some memories.

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks, Karen! Happy holiday!

  2. Sharron Lehman Avatar
    Sharron Lehman

    I loved this so much! I feel like something has happened to your poetry lately – it’s as if you’ve shed a skin or something, it’s just as deep but somehow airier, it just flies, I adored this one and the last one tremendously… xoxo from Sharron in Paris

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks so much, Sharron. I felt the shift, too, starting around June. I like that idea–shedding skin. There’s nothing intentional in the change–just something organic. Tu es si gentille. Bises. Tu me manques!

  3. Parag Panchal Avatar
    Parag Panchal

    Nice

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks for dropping by!

  4. Leila Lou Baldwin Avatar
    Leila Lou Baldwin

    I am endlessly stunned by my friend’s ability to transport my soul to times long past, to the innocence of a childhood that exists only in the most time-worn tatters of well-washed scarves fluttering in a warm and comforting breeze—I am transported, I am fed, I am soothed, and I am uplifted by your poetry Catherine, and I thank you.

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks for your words of encouragement, Leila Lou. It’s a joy to share memories. Much love to you and yours.

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