Through Irish Eyes-poem excerpt by randomstoryteller Catherine Hamrick-images of windswept Carolina beaches

I never scrounged the ground for a four-leaf clover

But lounged in the outfield, lacing daisy chains,

Wistfully wishing no ball would plop my way.

Landlocked, I drown in watery images,

For it is Irish to long for seas and lakes;

Today I will stomp an icy mud puddle

And misspell my name: Cait catches my fancy—

If lucid dreams were only true. . . .

The Atlantic rolls rough on Carolina shores,

No wild swan will touch down, only wind-braced birds

Trekking and pecking ripples erasing their prints.

A dark room at dusk, the beach is wet with clouds,

A dim black-and-white likeness: smoky gray puffs.

The sun sinks the sand into inky stains,

And my depression runs wild with joy

As the tide washes out, leaving silvery pools—

Footfalls shimmering on swiftly burned charcoal.

I take whiskey neat from a Kildare tumbler;

My hazel eyes turn green today, not my beer.

Lucky me.

Luck

13 responses to “Through Irish Eyes”

  1. Mary Avatar
    Mary

    Beautiful writing full of imagery.

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks for stopping by, Mary. Of course, if I need image inspiration, I always stop by your site. So much for painters or would-be painters to learn there. You have such a generous spirit!

  2. Karen Lin Avatar
    Karen Lin

    Nice…you always pick the best details! And the rythm here is like GREEN GREEN grasses swaying.

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Wow, that’s a nice way to think about rhythm. It never would have occurred to me. But I always learn from your comments. Thanks so much. Hope you and your family are doing well!

  3. John Cronin Avatar
    John Cronin

    Amazingly beautiful imagery. Thank you for bring these words together. Happy St. Patrick’s Day

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      I appreciate the time you took to read. Great to hear from an Irish fellow!

  4. liz Hamrick on Dec. 26, 201 Avatar
    liz Hamrick on Dec. 26, 201

    Thanks for the beautiful poem! As I read your words, pictures in my mind were so clear!!!

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks so much for your comments, Liz. I am glad the images appealed to you. If I could describe myself as a poet, I would prefer the term imagist, though I am 100 years behind that literary movement. : )

  5. Lottie Drennen Avatar
    Lottie Drennen

    wind braced birds

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks for reading, Lottie! I appreciate your support!

  6. bevbou Avatar
    bevbou

    I savoured every word. So beautifully written, thank you. I especially loved “my depression runs wild with joy”.

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks so much for reading. I appreciate your taking the time!

  7. Alison Copeland Avatar
    Alison Copeland

    How beautifully written. It gives my eyes commencement to the consciousness of energy, that is uncontaminated of worldly ruminations.
    Thank you! I needed that today.

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