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Shrove Tuesday in the Mid-Atlantic

9 responses to “Backyard Mardi Gras Baby”

  1. Aquileana Avatar
    Aquileana

    Mardi Gras baby is a sort of post apocalyptic versión of Eros (AKA Cupid)…
    When love is frozen, angels easily fall down from empyrean Grace…
    Beautiful poem, dear Catherine. All my best wishes to you. Aquileana :star:

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks. When I first read myths as a child, the tale of Psyche was a favorite. Now why is that? ; )

      1. Aquileana Avatar
        Aquileana

        Maybe because Psyche and Eros represent Soul and body, respectively?… I have once written about them… I will send you the post via Twitter!… All the best to you. Aquileana 😀

  2. Karen Lin Avatar
    Karen Lin

    nice! Looks a little like Le Pisseur in Belgium.

  3. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
    Catherine Hamrick

    Haha. As my southern Nannie said during our first ride through Brussels: “Look theyah, gulls. Ah doo buh-leev that liddle fellah is tinklin’ in public.The Yur-Oh-pe-ahns show no big mo-deh-sty.” Translation: “Look there, girls. I do believe that is a little fellah tinkling in public. The Europeans show no big modesty.”

  4. Dan Hise Avatar
    Dan Hise

    I love that you froze the wind and made space for a full representation of the cherub. Fellini had a knack of silencing all background noise just before a serious conversation. It’s a rich device.

  5. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
    Catherine Hamrick

    So I guess you liked it?

  6. Eric Sonnenschein Avatar
    Eric Sonnenschein

    I like “Ice sheeted green moss rock” a lot. It suggests the slipping, fall, and sense of burial that befall many, at least temporarily. It is a very concise and universal story—how each of us, at various times, fall “in disgrace with fortune and men’s eyes.”

  7. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
    Catherine Hamrick

    Thanks for reading, Eric! Lady Fortune, turn thy wheel. How odd about words. Intention is not the property of writers. I discover myself in the words of others about my words.

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