The sun fingers and prickles me;

The dock creaks gray,

Floating on algaed styrofoam.

A silvery leap spatters

This drowsy morning,

Now tail-thrashed alert.

The trout flee weedbeds,

And sunken-log mysteries

For spring-fed depths.

My toes curve over the edge

Of wave-slapped wood,

And I dive,

In an arc,

Into their current,

Plunging below

Tepid-safe waters,

Desiring mute cool green

Until it presses

Hard on my breast,

And I push upward,

Bursting into white air,

Raining diamonds.

Credit: Leaping Trout by Winslow Homer, Warren Collection—William Wilkins Warren Fund, Museum of Fine Arts, Boston

18 responses to “Swimming with Trout”

  1. Silver in the Barn Avatar
    Silver in the Barn

    Oh. I could read this again and again. As a matter of fact, I think I will. Such imagery and perfectly chosen words. Catherine, this is really good.

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thanks for reading. Remember, we need to meet up in VA!

      1. Silver in the Barn Avatar
        Silver in the Barn

        Where are you Catherine?

  2. Dr Mustapha Tahir Avatar
    Dr Mustapha Tahir

    Crisp. Vivid. Can only come from someone with an extremely fertile imagination. Thank you Storyteller. Love it!

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Thank you, Dr. M. Even as you run hither and thither, your encouragement always makes my day. We need to Skype! Really!

      I am enjoying all the great info on both your blogs!

      Your across-the-big-pond friend, CH

      P.S. Readers, Dr. M. shares interesting insights, especially on health, way of being, and world affairs. Check it out: http://mustaphatahir.com/

      I always benefit from being informed. Also, look for Dr. Mustapha Tahir’s comments (UK) on LinkedIn.

  3. Dr Mustapha Tahir Avatar
    Dr Mustapha Tahir

    Reblogged this on Dr Mustapha Tahir and commented:
    A blog to remember from Random Storyteller.

  4. donnaanddiablo Avatar
    donnaanddiablo

    Wiping the water from my brow and feeling refreshed by my dip into the fertile crescent of your imagination, C……

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Oh, dear friend, thank you for writing. Your every encouraging word is so meaningful!

  5. Eric Alagan Avatar
    Eric Alagan

    I don’t do much poetry but love well written ones.

    Thank you for sharing this,
    Eric

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Hi Eric. I appreciate your note. I think Dr. Tahir led me to your blog. I enjoy it!

  6. Karen Lin Avatar
    Karen Lin

    Lovely lovely lovely. Have you thought to self publishing a book of poetry?

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      Hi Karen. I’m so glad you like it. Any poetry book is down the road, if at all. I do not have much experience in the genre. But it is fun to play around. I will write a catch-up email. I missed your class!

  7. Dan Hise Avatar
    Dan Hise

    Damn fine poem, youngster.

  8. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
    Catherine Hamrick

    Thank you, Dr. Dan. I write a poem about every two years. Great to hear from you. This is an “A,” right? ; )

    1. Dan Hise Avatar
      Dan Hise

      With the Tour de France coming up, I will borrow some of its jargon and say that your creation deserves more than an “A”. It is “beyond category.”

  9. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
    Catherine Hamrick

    I can go with that. It is in my nature to defy category (when I can get away with it).

  10. Dianna Avatar
    Dianna

    This is beautiful!

    1. Catherine Hamrick Avatar
      Catherine Hamrick

      I am glad you like it, Dianna. Thanks for reading.

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